tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post1391793370911150842..comments2023-09-07T05:09:13.736-07:00Comments on Writing in the Margins, Bursting at the Seams: The BeastAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-26313464494713407462012-01-27T10:26:21.933-08:002012-01-27T10:26:21.933-08:00Besides, I’d known early enough where babies came ...Besides, I’d known early enough where babies came from: Seems every day my mother told me babies came from mistakes. - I love that. It reminds me of a friend of mine. Her mother was always on about how she (my friend) ruined her otherwise great life. Grrr! Makes me so mad! The dialogue's great, too.Satu Gustafsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-91426861671576079862012-01-26T20:14:45.508-08:002012-01-26T20:14:45.508-08:00This is another great piece, Kelly. Dialogue is no...This is another great piece, Kelly. Dialogue is notoriously difficult to get right but yours is perfect and really brings the story to life. Hope you'll join us for the new weekend challenge going up later today.Trifetanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-1358746215428095982012-01-26T13:43:58.646-08:002012-01-26T13:43:58.646-08:00"Seems every day my mother told me babies cam..."Seems every day my mother told me babies came from mistakes." I like that dash of humor in a bleak situation.jesterqueen1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-28169180430020239192012-01-26T11:59:03.019-08:002012-01-26T11:59:03.019-08:00You are so good at this! Fabulous voice. And I l...You are so good at this! Fabulous voice. And I loved the way you made this a whole story with such a short amount of words. I aspire to be able to do that!Susan Okatynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-29923662997675937692012-01-26T11:51:49.489-08:002012-01-26T11:51:49.489-08:00That dialogue really brings your story to life. An...That dialogue really brings your story to life. And I loved that the mother is the real monster of the story. Wow.karenhttp://karenismuttering.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-19810997828149837122012-01-26T11:46:49.556-08:002012-01-26T11:46:49.556-08:00That dialogue really brings your story to life. An...That dialogue really brings your story to life. And I loved that the mother is the real monster of the story. Wow.karenhttp://karenismuttering.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-85985127602069520342012-01-25T20:15:55.523-08:002012-01-25T20:15:55.523-08:00ooh, I love the ending. The realization that she i...ooh, I love the ending. The realization that she is trapped. I hope she can break free from that beast within<br /><br />Another great piece about the people of Medford!Carriehttp://viewsfromnature.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-26872012911194794362012-01-25T15:45:33.341-08:002012-01-25T15:45:33.341-08:00This is very interesting. I like it!This is very interesting. I like it!SAMhttp://frommywriteside.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-18995982411796309122012-01-25T15:43:03.189-08:002012-01-25T15:43:03.189-08:00This is very interesting. I like it!This is very interesting. I like it!SAMhttp://frommywriteside.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-32937212007486915452012-01-25T15:18:40.187-08:002012-01-25T15:18:40.187-08:00I love this. Especially the beginning paragraph. ...I love this. Especially the beginning paragraph. Your country voice is my favorite.Amandahttp://www.lastmomonearth.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-21778259268015861032012-01-24T19:00:54.112-08:002012-01-24T19:00:54.112-08:00Loved this. Sharp, bitey I writing and a good dose...Loved this. Sharp, bitey I writing and a good dose of sass. :)Ashainthailandnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-83222032884731163752012-01-24T14:45:34.146-08:002012-01-24T14:45:34.146-08:00great read!great read!CBhttp://www.columbibuneo.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-89931229704302374822012-01-24T14:33:59.099-08:002012-01-24T14:33:59.099-08:00Matter of fact and country always seem to go toget...Matter of fact and country always seem to go together. Enjoyed the write.Michael Yostnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-24098222478082165362012-01-24T11:00:33.347-08:002012-01-24T11:00:33.347-08:00The last paragraph makes this a true horror story....The last paragraph makes this a true horror story.Tara R.http://thinspiralnotebook.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-43294567735417527832012-01-24T05:13:23.978-08:002012-01-24T05:13:23.978-08:00Are we all going to have to move to Medford to fin...Are we all going to have to move to Medford to find out what's going on...Give us the missing chapters... Once again, last line the kicker leaving food for thought bringing the reader back to bigger issues.jaumnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-52073490667458764242012-01-24T02:28:26.248-08:002012-01-24T02:28:26.248-08:00A great write on a common vignette of life...A great write on a common vignette of life...Elizabeth Youngnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-59720185176191843452012-01-23T20:06:48.683-08:002012-01-23T20:06:48.683-08:00Run, Ellie, Run!Run, Ellie, Run!barbaranoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-16212571334920537542012-01-23T18:15:44.622-08:002012-01-23T18:15:44.622-08:00Love the dialog!Love the dialog!Annabellehttp://glassoffancy.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-49318424473455510832012-01-23T17:51:32.834-08:002012-01-23T17:51:32.834-08:00I like how the monster(s) is revealing itself to t...I like how the monster(s) is revealing itself to the other characters. Wonderful dialogue. I'm becoming a fanboi. I like everything you write.<br /><br />dude, this was soooo beast....as my teenager would sayTLanceBnoreply@blogger.com