tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post1449741112807138654..comments2023-09-07T05:09:13.736-07:00Comments on Writing in the Margins, Bursting at the Seams: Two Months Shy of NineAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-27038527033266013842013-02-21T13:57:48.642-08:002013-02-21T13:57:48.642-08:00Well done - vivid dialogue. The characters came t...Well done - vivid dialogue. The characters came to life and within just a few paragraphs I was rooting for Phillip and hoping that Frank would take a hike. So glad that Phillip isn't cowardly and I'm still cheering for him!Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-31004017551924294462013-02-21T12:00:57.336-08:002013-02-21T12:00:57.336-08:00Great piece of writing and great character develop...Great piece of writing and great character development. I was rooting for Phillip by the fourth paragraph. Would love to see more of him!Suzannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10380277216952785078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-10574352500974584812013-02-21T10:59:47.659-08:002013-02-21T10:59:47.659-08:00Wonderful dialog. I love how easy it is to identif...Wonderful dialog. I love how easy it is to identify with Phillip.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-48734261230684720172013-02-21T04:38:14.895-08:002013-02-21T04:38:14.895-08:00Great interaction between these two. I love that P...Great interaction between these two. I love that Phillip goes after Frank in the end.VictoriaKPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07987993161693042703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-59887837258942500762013-02-20T19:28:02.325-08:002013-02-20T19:28:02.325-08:00I love the voice of this one. When Frank asked if...I love the voice of this one. When Frank asked if she was sweet on him, it made me think of the 'olden days'. How sad that a mom would send a young child to live on the streets, though.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-92008603003445386032013-02-20T16:56:56.529-08:002013-02-20T16:56:56.529-08:00Your dialogue is fantastic! I want to know what ha...Your dialogue is fantastic! I want to know what happens next to the laywer lady. :)Flippa Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04829544779655351950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-67425530740733012922013-02-20T14:09:01.348-08:002013-02-20T14:09:01.348-08:00Frank does not sound like a likable fellow!Frank does not sound like a likable fellow!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-44995301649086293502013-02-20T11:18:30.050-08:002013-02-20T11:18:30.050-08:00Awesome, kelly.. I can't get past the horror o...Awesome, kelly.. I can't get past the horror of a mother turning her kid out onto the streets 2 months shy of nine. Great title, dialog and ending!stephhttp://peopledothingswiththeirlives.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-76428838533635906232013-02-20T09:47:56.933-08:002013-02-20T09:47:56.933-08:00different. NIcely done.different. NIcely done.sthttp://www.awriterweavesatale.com/2013/02/09/a-tale-of-snow-woe/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-26725320103836034782013-02-20T04:41:35.095-08:002013-02-20T04:41:35.095-08:00Dove right into that one, and love the resolution!...Dove right into that one, and love the resolution!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-22075404236397114892013-02-20T00:51:04.464-08:002013-02-20T00:51:04.464-08:00Excellent - I'd love to see what happens hereExcellent - I'd love to see what happens hereSandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-44006560386289849112013-02-19T22:46:52.510-08:002013-02-19T22:46:52.510-08:00The product is natural and minus аny side-еffеctѕ ...The product is natural and minus аny side-еffеctѕ and claimed to givе ѵisible benеfits in beneath 4 wееks.<br /><br /><br />my web pаge <a href="http://articlecommentary.com/article.php?id=41" rel="nofollow">articlecommentary.Com</a><br /><i>My web site</i> - <b><a href="http://amc.jbcourse.com/user/view.php?id=15978&course=1" rel="nofollow">jbcourse.com</a></b>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-53752907080131237872013-02-19T20:46:21.523-08:002013-02-19T20:46:21.523-08:00I love the natural interaction between the two cha...I love the natural interaction between the two characters. I want to know more!Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-20577805781124494582013-02-19T17:29:08.892-08:002013-02-19T17:29:08.892-08:00nice. I got to get to my own trifecta, haven't...nice. I got to get to my own trifecta, haven't had a chance to do it yet. Barely got my Tale Tues up with the kids home again...sthttp://www.awriterweavesatale.com/2013/02/09/a-tale-of-snow-woe/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-68145219708622108762013-02-19T16:27:01.935-08:002013-02-19T16:27:01.935-08:00What a great plot you unfold. I agree with others,...What a great plot you unfold. I agree with others, we need more!<br />On another note, Just finished and reread "The Rebirth" in your book. One of my all time favorites!j umbaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09486618007344028103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-78706357896876818382013-02-19T15:20:56.961-08:002013-02-19T15:20:56.961-08:00This is terrific. Very good dialogue.This is terrific. Very good dialogue.Bohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05985370927609164513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-23960227512550875712013-02-19T11:24:02.131-08:002013-02-19T11:24:02.131-08:00Oh, good for Phillip. I'm not sure what exact...Oh, good for Phillip. I'm not sure what exactly Frank has in mind, but I'm pretty sure I don't want him to get it. Your descriptions here are spare but the characters come through really well with the details you've chosen. Annabellehttp://glassoffancy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-77639456272130563562013-02-19T10:54:03.281-08:002013-02-19T10:54:03.281-08:00Awesome! If this were the start to a novel or a lo...Awesome! If this were the start to a novel or a longer story, I would read on eagerly. What a great set up, and such interesting characters to have a conflict.Brianhttp://www.pinionpost.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-5527431656794863332013-02-19T09:06:50.406-08:002013-02-19T09:06:50.406-08:00I love the dialogue here -- well done!I love the dialogue here -- well done!Barbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05538106233407301480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-32704141040733413132013-02-19T02:48:27.541-08:002013-02-19T02:48:27.541-08:00brilliant -- that's all i can say. well done!brilliant -- that's all i can say. well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-76665005600785970302013-02-19T02:28:00.230-08:002013-02-19T02:28:00.230-08:00This is very intriguing, the dialogue feels so rea...This is very intriguing, the dialogue feels so real. I want to know how it continues :(Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03946042707794806737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-51610510201788676592013-02-18T20:02:20.848-08:002013-02-18T20:02:20.848-08:00This is very nicely done ... I want more ...This is very nicely done ... I want more ...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.com