tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post1651773949561037115..comments2023-09-07T05:09:13.736-07:00Comments on Writing in the Margins, Bursting at the Seams: Love SceneAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-73779842719651248322012-02-13T02:41:03.201-08:002012-02-13T02:41:03.201-08:00Thanks so much for linking up this weekend. Rememb...Thanks so much for linking up this weekend. Remember, this weekend’s entries are being judged by the Trifecta community so make sure you visit the site to register your vote! Hope you can join us for Monday’s prompt!Trifectawritingchallengehttp://trifectawritingchallenge.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-11422890217445469152012-02-12T12:07:46.496-08:002012-02-12T12:07:46.496-08:00eek! I had a hard time. I kept checking the list.eek! I had a hard time. I kept checking the list.jesterqueen1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-81401214555526968332012-02-12T11:40:35.898-08:002012-02-12T11:40:35.898-08:00Thank you, Annabelle.Thank you, Annabelle.Kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-8341525717991619472012-02-12T11:40:22.743-08:002012-02-12T11:40:22.743-08:00THanks for reading!.THanks for reading!.Kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-53840713647521892332012-02-12T11:40:08.765-08:002012-02-12T11:40:08.765-08:00Thanks, Elizabeth.Thanks, Elizabeth.Kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-27055703050677125232012-02-12T11:39:44.930-08:002012-02-12T11:39:44.930-08:00Thanks for reading - I had a fire in there--nearly...Thanks for reading - I had a fire in there--nearly missed the forbidden word.Kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-79396512272932726572012-02-12T11:39:10.418-08:002012-02-12T11:39:10.418-08:00Thanks for reading!Thanks for reading!Kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-47181578614479913122012-02-12T11:38:58.949-08:002012-02-12T11:38:58.949-08:00Thanks, Karen. I'm glad this rang true for you...Thanks, Karen. I'm glad this rang true for you.Kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-75204607672053008542012-02-12T11:38:17.382-08:002012-02-12T11:38:17.382-08:00Thanks for reading. I didn't want to go with ...Thanks for reading. I didn't want to go with the obvious and I've had this image in my head for a long time. I was glad I could use it.Kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-22892003058362583852012-02-12T11:37:46.660-08:002012-02-12T11:37:46.660-08:00Thanks, Alison!Thanks, Alison!Kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-16021787080674757612012-02-12T10:59:36.433-08:002012-02-12T10:59:36.433-08:00Kelly, you are on a roll! Before this lovely piec...Kelly, you are on a roll! Before this lovely piece, I read your creepily good Joseph story on Indie Ink.Alisonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-18693805108105341522012-02-12T10:23:44.434-08:002012-02-12T10:23:44.434-08:00Our first love is Momma. I love where you took thi...Our first love is Momma. I love where you took this.The Gal Herselfhttp://onegalsmusings.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-65001438366538609052012-02-12T08:07:34.069-08:002012-02-12T08:07:34.069-08:00This was absolutely divine, no pun intended. I lov...This was absolutely divine, no pun intended. I love the way she got what she needed and was able to let go.<br /><br />I once sat at the bedside and held the hand of a dying man who barely knew me, for a week. He was my husband's grandfather, someone he also barely knew. When the time came for him to die, he politely waited until I'd gone and his son (my husband's uncle) firmly within his grasp.<br /><br />This reflected the feeling I had perfectly.karenhttp://karenismuttering.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-78316906377097180792012-02-12T06:32:38.668-08:002012-02-12T06:32:38.668-08:00touching.touching.Templeton's furynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-64208611936488251362012-02-11T21:07:07.717-08:002012-02-11T21:07:07.717-08:00I found "grasping and searching, searching an...I found "grasping and searching, searching and grasping" so lovely. And there was just a splash of humor in "She considers coming back", instantly quelled by the sad hope in the last line.jesterqueen1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-87535929915635253922012-02-11T17:20:59.393-08:002012-02-11T17:20:59.393-08:00This is beautiful, and exemplifies perfectly what ...This is beautiful, and exemplifies perfectly what all mothers know in their heart of hearts; it's up to the children to make their relationships work after a certain age. Awesome post!Elizabeth Youngnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-43044466552483391872012-02-11T17:16:22.993-08:002012-02-11T17:16:22.993-08:00ooooooh this is lovely! Very beautifully written. ...ooooooh this is lovely! Very beautifully written. Well done.Lessa's Stuffnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-28703485235537809792012-02-11T16:59:48.903-08:002012-02-11T16:59:48.903-08:00This is a lovely piece -- and those last three sen...This is a lovely piece -- and those last three sentences are just right.Annabellehttp://glassoffancy.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-29856769020624130502012-02-11T13:47:00.464-08:002012-02-11T13:47:00.464-08:00Thank you, Barbara.Thank you, Barbara.Kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-37658058047641508552012-02-11T13:46:46.333-08:002012-02-11T13:46:46.333-08:00Thank you for reading!Thank you for reading!Kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-69359729176768986622012-02-11T13:32:25.197-08:002012-02-11T13:32:25.197-08:00To go Home, surrounded by loved ones, whether they...To go Home, surrounded by loved ones, whether they feel it or not, is a desire of many. This - is beautifulbarbarahttp://purplemoose.kenaiwriter.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-58725614652993930212012-02-11T09:24:38.749-08:002012-02-11T09:24:38.749-08:00Wonderful images of one dysfunctional family comin...Wonderful images of one dysfunctional family coming together for probably the last time. Good job.Nancy MacMillanhttp://www.facebook.com/nancy.macmillan3noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-61149049545519222482012-02-11T06:51:01.270-08:002012-02-11T06:51:01.270-08:00Thanks for reading!Thanks for reading!Kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-40763973788142618002012-02-11T06:50:47.029-08:002012-02-11T06:50:47.029-08:00Thanks for reading!Thanks for reading!Kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-69604556319641969692012-02-11T05:02:28.355-08:002012-02-11T05:02:28.355-08:00You certainly met the challenge on this one. Great...You certainly met the challenge on this one. Great food for thought. Loved the lines, "She considered coming back. Then decides against it" Sort of she has done all she can in the situation.. and now it's up to others.Jaumnoreply@blogger.com