tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post1952009866207740612..comments2023-09-07T05:09:13.736-07:00Comments on Writing in the Margins, Bursting at the Seams: On the Head of a Pin...Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-56567656807367987162012-02-20T20:08:14.968-08:002012-02-20T20:08:14.968-08:00That's delightful. Bitsy's transformation ...That's delightful. Bitsy's transformation from intolerant to grudgingly grateful is lovely, and Lilly Jean's subtle shift from pushy-helpful to impressed is also really good.jesterqueen1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-31471979785024893412012-02-20T16:35:10.699-08:002012-02-20T16:35:10.699-08:00i like it :Di like it :DBrannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-19594250503672833742012-02-20T16:31:57.407-08:002012-02-20T16:31:57.407-08:00A neat way to include your prompt. I really have e...A neat way to include your prompt. I really have enjoyed this story. I hope to one day read the entire book.Tara R.http://thinspiralnotebook.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-44898829310152503412012-02-19T10:19:17.810-08:002012-02-19T10:19:17.810-08:00Yeah Lilly Jean! This to me best exemplifies LJ...Yeah Lilly Jean! This to me best exemplifies LJ's "core strength" and self-reliance. Great piece.Leslicollinsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-84079641331736947152012-02-19T05:30:21.104-08:002012-02-19T05:30:21.104-08:00It's amazing how we sometimes reject the help ...It's amazing how we sometimes reject the help of a friend to later realize we needed it all along. You have portrayed this extremely well here. Great job!Elizabeth Youngnoreply@blogger.com