tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post2537692602610250556..comments2023-09-07T05:09:13.736-07:00Comments on Writing in the Margins, Bursting at the Seams: Roses in DecemberAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-79755304464599698812011-10-08T05:28:49.898-07:002011-10-08T05:28:49.898-07:00You painted the picture of a proud man who is not ...You painted the picture of a proud man who is not afraid of hard work . Very interesting location as well .MISHhttp://writer-in-transit.co.za/delight-at-dawn/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-4192722780246399432011-10-07T21:20:21.711-07:002011-10-07T21:20:21.711-07:00I like this. he is an interesting character, you w...I like this. he is an interesting character, you wonder what his story is.Cherylnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-84858762305771287012011-10-07T14:06:53.346-07:002011-10-07T14:06:53.346-07:00Lovely, I enjoyed the poignant way in which you wr...Lovely, I enjoyed the poignant way in which you wrote about this situation. The candy cane arm fits in so beautifully with the December theme.Elizabeth Youngnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-72654204159641241232011-10-07T12:47:34.401-07:002011-10-07T12:47:34.401-07:00Poor guy! So very sad- hauntingly so.Poor guy! So very sad- hauntingly so.Galit Breenhttp://twitter.com/galitbreennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-20060875601738152612011-10-07T12:46:19.130-07:002011-10-07T12:46:19.130-07:00I think you did a good job of describing the locat...I think you did a good job of describing the location of the Rose Man. I liked your description of the candy cane arm of the train guard and how the train blasts past. I also loved the depot "where weary travelers head to work in a blue of colors and odors."<br /><br />As far as the Rose Man, you also did a great job of helping me picture him. I like your words, "Thickened stems caress crumpled bills through fingerless gloves."<br /><br />This was an interesting read. I'd love to see the entire poem:/`(Sarahttp://www.sarahealy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-56251732490440102912011-10-07T06:38:26.025-07:002011-10-07T06:38:26.025-07:00Oh, my heart breaks for him. I pictured him so per...Oh, my heart breaks for him. I pictured him so perfectly though...I love the feelings you evoked from me. I want to find The Rose Man and give him a hug.katieross83noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-80319843515688181922011-10-07T03:42:03.601-07:002011-10-07T03:42:03.601-07:00That sounds so sad. I want to buy some roses from ...That sounds so sad. I want to buy some roses from him now.sweetbutterblissnoreply@blogger.com