tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post2892062766199571685..comments2023-09-07T05:09:13.736-07:00Comments on Writing in the Margins, Bursting at the Seams: Howard SnickeredAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-61155659323840685202011-06-21T06:26:28.883-07:002011-06-21T06:26:28.883-07:00Thanks, Bernie! This is slooowwwllly coming togeth...Thanks, Bernie! This is slooowwwllly coming together.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-78009929731570287652011-06-18T06:43:32.891-07:002011-06-18T06:43:32.891-07:00Thanks so much, Terry! Still struggling to figure ...Thanks so much, Terry! Still struggling to figure this novel out.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-5537538394668995742011-06-18T06:43:08.397-07:002011-06-18T06:43:08.397-07:00I'm glad you want to know these characters, Ga...I'm glad you want to know these characters, Galit. I've been trying to get to know them for 4 years.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-54995792337008504202011-06-18T06:42:44.649-07:002011-06-18T06:42:44.649-07:00Thanks for reading, Lori!Thanks for reading, Lori!kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-8258307805068331782011-06-17T17:00:13.378-07:002011-06-17T17:00:13.378-07:00This is really great. The characters are popping o...This is really great. The characters are popping off the page, and your names are wonderful. Really enjoyed this :)lori mcclurehttp://profiles.google.com/loriamcclurenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-3981081022823291662011-06-17T12:43:44.477-07:002011-06-17T12:43:44.477-07:00Love it, lady! I could hear their convo, smell the...Love it, lady! I could hear their convo, smell the hairspray. You really brought me to a time and place without a whole lot of background!<br /><br />Also? I'm so curious about these characters and am looking forward to getting to know them better!Galit Breenhttp://twitter.com/galitbreennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-66123391242285737002011-06-17T07:56:38.124-07:002011-06-17T07:56:38.124-07:00Thanks for reading, Emily!Thanks for reading, Emily!kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-79994810238278623582011-06-17T07:56:12.443-07:002011-06-17T07:56:12.443-07:00Oh, good catch, Carrie. It should be Bitsy, thank...Oh, good catch, Carrie. It should be Bitsy, thanks. I'll correct that. I'm not going to explain the scream because it would give too much away.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-37349506530915078832011-06-17T07:49:03.469-07:002011-06-17T07:49:03.469-07:00interesting dialogue. I could picture the characte...interesting dialogue. I could picture the characters sitting in the diner, chatting. The use of both first and last names is an interesting effect. I picture the characters MORE once I hear both names.<br /><br />one question: this section: <br />“Cancelled before it got off the ground.” Lilly Jean leaned her massive body over the counter. “You ordering today, Lilly Jean or did you mistake my restaurant for a beauty parlor?” <br /><br />Should that be Lilly Jean leaned? Or should it be Bitsy leaned. It would make more sense if it was Bitsy.<br /><br />I'm not sure I get why Bitsy screamed at the end. Was it a scream of laughter? Or a scream of terror. <br /><br />visiting from RDCCarriehttp://viewsfromnature.comnoreply@blogger.com