tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post3203192725968319579..comments2023-09-07T05:09:13.736-07:00Comments on Writing in the Margins, Bursting at the Seams: Soul BoundAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-63230906765963771662012-11-16T01:31:43.855-08:002012-11-16T01:31:43.855-08:00Fantastic ending. Thanks for joining up not once,...Fantastic ending. Thanks for joining up not once, but twice!Trifectahttp://www.trifectawritingchallenge.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-4943873979391785022012-11-15T06:44:38.460-08:002012-11-15T06:44:38.460-08:00Souls can't be conjured in words... nice tag o...Souls can't be conjured in words... nice tag of both prompt and part 1. Great job!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-58709956937013621002012-11-14T21:48:43.913-08:002012-11-14T21:48:43.913-08:00Even though this isn't a happy ending (my favo...Even though this isn't a happy ending (my favorite type of ending) I still enjoyed it. I love the pun in the the first sentence of your part. Nice work with the prompt.Rachaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391186958774991367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-89806921528694204182012-11-14T18:54:57.455-08:002012-11-14T18:54:57.455-08:00Your parts flowed together nicely. I liked the wi...Your parts flowed together nicely. I liked the withered heart line as well. I feel her uncertainty and would like to think she'll get her happy ending someday.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-84072886695814070512012-11-14T16:11:09.897-08:002012-11-14T16:11:09.897-08:00What an interesting writing concept... except I do...What an interesting writing concept... except I don't know who to tell NICE JOBj umbaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09486618007344028103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-61593109153161689762012-11-14T08:40:00.752-08:002012-11-14T08:40:00.752-08:00"She offered him her withered heart." Be..."She offered him her withered heart." Beautiful line. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-47662053424104002742012-11-14T08:14:11.624-08:002012-11-14T08:14:11.624-08:00well done - working as a team can be fun. :)well done - working as a team can be fun. :)barbarahttp://purplemoose.kenaiwriter.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-12263556582477038672012-11-14T06:29:46.271-08:002012-11-14T06:29:46.271-08:00I love how you tied it all in and left the ending ...I love how you tied it all in and left the ending open ^__^ You guys worked well together!Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-41978142885805896842012-11-14T05:36:56.755-08:002012-11-14T05:36:56.755-08:00Well done. Nice loop back to the original prompt....Well done. Nice loop back to the original prompt. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com