tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post4554536934833185776..comments2023-09-07T05:09:13.736-07:00Comments on Writing in the Margins, Bursting at the Seams: RaindropsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-30915897977556684022013-12-02T04:15:11.439-08:002013-12-02T04:15:11.439-08:00Another vivid story. really liked the starting sen...Another vivid story. really liked the starting sentence "If rain held color, taste and smell, each drop would be a memory of you"! j umbaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09486618007344028103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-9182555780354182612013-12-02T00:15:59.748-08:002013-12-02T00:15:59.748-08:00This paints such a strong visual image. Well done...This paints such a strong visual image. Well done.Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16492626287830278024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-40984980233701497292013-12-01T20:53:29.223-08:002013-12-01T20:53:29.223-08:00Face*Face*Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08702223252134051586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-67643272035926736182013-12-01T20:52:37.238-08:002013-12-01T20:52:37.238-08:00This is beautifully written. I love how you gave r...This is beautifully written. I love how you gave raindrops a new facade! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08702223252134051586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-30970740915711338972013-12-01T20:00:28.967-08:002013-12-01T20:00:28.967-08:00Oh wow this is awesome.Oh wow this is awesome.Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-1684250748302084752013-12-01T15:41:13.941-08:002013-12-01T15:41:13.941-08:00Ah, Kelly, I can see, taste and smell the chalk pa...Ah, Kelly, I can see, taste and smell the chalk paintings washing away.<br />What a beautiful connection - raindrop and memory.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-7261386164672256452013-12-01T14:33:51.850-08:002013-12-01T14:33:51.850-08:00I love this!I love this!Tooiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05987266164355302658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-7483066839882608942013-12-01T12:17:27.057-08:002013-12-01T12:17:27.057-08:00I had a chalk painting by my niece all summer (no ...I had a chalk painting by my niece all summer (no rain in CA in the summers). It recently washed away in the autumn rain. I watched it over the course of a couple of days. Makes this piece all the more exquisite with that memory.stephhttp://restraintunfettered.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-21930722870772301782013-12-01T11:38:51.610-08:002013-12-01T11:38:51.610-08:00Ohh-the last line is just exquisite!Ohh-the last line is just exquisite!Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-70902554220852466172013-12-01T06:15:28.530-08:002013-12-01T06:15:28.530-08:00This took my breath away. Lovely, Kelly!This took my breath away. Lovely, Kelly!Valerie Boersmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08372768206512562126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-80903836877815590072013-12-01T00:00:44.050-08:002013-12-01T00:00:44.050-08:00Time heals and rounds the edges of pain. Very nice...Time heals and rounds the edges of pain. Very nicely done, Kelly.Jo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-11756517891631773952013-11-30T20:16:51.346-08:002013-11-30T20:16:51.346-08:00Gorgeous, Kelly. Each drop would be a memory of yo...Gorgeous, Kelly. Each drop would be a memory of you is so sweet and full of longing. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com