tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post537812427656795951..comments2023-09-07T05:09:13.736-07:00Comments on Writing in the Margins, Bursting at the Seams: Never Never LandAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comBlogger38125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-46865599928546546302012-05-24T14:58:18.453-07:002012-05-24T14:58:18.453-07:00Fiction? Thank Goodness. Beautifully written.Fiction? Thank Goodness. Beautifully written.Adriennehttp://twitter.com/TheMommyMessnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-23830417686593461632012-05-24T13:58:42.999-07:002012-05-24T13:58:42.999-07:00I'm glad this was fiction because otherwise I&...I'm glad this was fiction because otherwise I'd be asking for MORE! Why? Why? <br />Great piece!Jackiehttp://twitter.com/notwifezillanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-44424089253635241212012-05-24T10:49:21.980-07:002012-05-24T10:49:21.980-07:00um.. wow. that was so... haunting. good stuff!!um.. wow. that was so... haunting. good stuff!!christinahttp://finallymom.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-53171610042103206252012-05-24T09:11:48.640-07:002012-05-24T09:11:48.640-07:00So glad that was fiction! Really well written...So glad that was fiction! Really well written...Musings of a Writer Momnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-84031146114825217552012-05-24T07:45:13.966-07:002012-05-24T07:45:13.966-07:00Wow. Beautiful and imbued with emotion. Happy to h...Wow. Beautiful and imbued with emotion. Happy to have found your words. Off to check out this Trifecta writing challenge!AidanDonnelleyRowleyhttp://twitter.com/ADonnRowleynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-24104730031191066672012-05-24T04:07:11.865-07:002012-05-24T04:07:11.865-07:00Very moving. You are a darn good writer. ErinVery moving. You are a darn good writer. ErinSisterhoodofthesensiblemomsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-56899869323432718292012-05-23T20:01:32.448-07:002012-05-23T20:01:32.448-07:00Really strong response to a pretty awesome prompt....Really strong response to a pretty awesome prompt. Intense and a little to real for comfort.kdwaldhttp://twitter.com/kdwaldnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-73144034095457280042012-05-23T17:45:18.080-07:002012-05-23T17:45:18.080-07:00Oh god I'm so glad that was fiction. I was cr...Oh god I'm so glad that was fiction. I was crying! Awesome job!!!!!!!!!!Kimberly Puglianohttp://twitter.com/GisSilentnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-91479671821583719642012-05-23T11:12:28.226-07:002012-05-23T11:12:28.226-07:00Love your fiction. :) Nice work.Love your fiction. :) Nice work.Kathy Kramerhttp://msannomalley.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-61801103275681255782012-05-23T11:08:33.638-07:002012-05-23T11:08:33.638-07:00I didn't know this was fiction until I read th...I didn't know this was fiction until I read the comments. Thank goodness, I was very sad. But god, great writing!Treading Water in the Kiddie Poolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07200936787006653961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-48463268175587353312012-05-23T09:22:39.887-07:002012-05-23T09:22:39.887-07:00Awesome job :)Awesome job :)Lemonade Ladyhttp://sweetlemonadeblog.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-75769188264210929902012-05-23T07:02:37.404-07:002012-05-23T07:02:37.404-07:00Wow. You worked the hell out of that writing promp...Wow. You worked the hell out of that writing prompt. Wow. EllenSisterhoodoftheSensibleMomshttp://www.sisterhoodofthesensiblemoms.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-12811294630752785712012-05-23T02:23:21.743-07:002012-05-23T02:23:21.743-07:00Ah, lovely yet heartwrenching. I love how you add ...Ah, lovely yet heartwrenching. I love how you add a twist to the prompt.jamieywriteshttp://jamieywrites.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-24905616268370032552012-05-22T20:48:53.917-07:002012-05-22T20:48:53.917-07:00Oh wow, what a well told and sad story. It fits pe...Oh wow, what a well told and sad story. It fits perfectly with the picture. Great job!Dawnhttp://www.happinesscubed.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-70061380018388452482012-05-22T20:35:02.491-07:002012-05-22T20:35:02.491-07:00you envoke such loneliness here. haunting.you envoke such loneliness here. haunting.Tara_pohlkottepressnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-41498214343360993452012-05-22T18:42:50.809-07:002012-05-22T18:42:50.809-07:00Oh, my, how heartwrenching. Lovely job writing, re...Oh, my, how heartwrenching. Lovely job writing, really...the sadness and loneliness are very apparent. I love what you did with the prompt.katieross83noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-24868817111282828522012-05-22T10:46:08.365-07:002012-05-22T10:46:08.365-07:00Aw, good story. Fits nicely with the picture.Aw, good story. Fits nicely with the picture.Mayor Giahttp://www.mayorgia.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-27664895470995169222012-05-22T08:36:12.677-07:002012-05-22T08:36:12.677-07:00Great Story. It was expertly told! It really draws...Great Story. It was expertly told! It really draws the reader in and makes them feel, sad and curious!Carrie Siefferthttp://www.facebook.com/Carriemomvillenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-2480095903406455992012-05-22T08:08:40.312-07:002012-05-22T08:08:40.312-07:00Haunting. Nice job on the prompt. As it elicits ma...Haunting. Nice job on the prompt. As it elicits many questions, like why didn't he ever see them again, and is he looking back through old age, that snippet is told very well. It leaves the reader wanting more.Stephanie Brennanhttp://twitter.com/B4Stephnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-23143214003845976742012-05-21T05:51:16.936-07:002012-05-21T05:51:16.936-07:00Painful but then binding. I liked the story.Painful but then binding. I liked the story.Ruby Manchandahttp://scraps-from-life.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-19620788413379447502012-05-20T16:17:53.473-07:002012-05-20T16:17:53.473-07:00Sad, lonely and empty. I feel for this guy. Great ...Sad, lonely and empty. I feel for this guy. Great story.Ginanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-78344575135394819092012-05-20T12:31:13.721-07:002012-05-20T12:31:13.721-07:00This elicits the feeling of being hollow and insub...This elicits the feeling of being hollow and insubstantial, like a ghost. You have encapsulated loneliness quite well.<br />Thanks for playing. Don't forget to come back for the new prompt tomorrow.Trifectawritingchallengehttp://trifectawritingchallenge.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-71955916612756446872012-05-20T06:57:55.967-07:002012-05-20T06:57:55.967-07:00Ouch. Take the baby and run, leaving Dad behind ho...Ouch. Take the baby and run, leaving Dad behind holding the bag.Jester Queenhttp://jesterqueen.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-11029548526761560642012-05-20T06:37:36.576-07:002012-05-20T06:37:36.576-07:00O my! I was in a pretty cheery mood this morning,...O my! I was in a pretty cheery mood this morning, cleaning, mopping, shaking rugs, watering plants....hmmm...am I Lonely...<br /><br />This is most profound, Kelly; I really liked the fact you kept repeating the phrase that continued pulling the mood together.<br /><br />Really well done.Marynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-25918152779768084392012-05-19T21:43:41.783-07:002012-05-19T21:43:41.783-07:00I like your story, but it is so, so sad. I could ...I like your story, but it is so, so sad. I could feel his isolation and loneliness.JannaTWriteshttp://jannatwrites.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com