tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post5603184689823434496..comments2023-09-07T05:09:13.736-07:00Comments on Writing in the Margins, Bursting at the Seams: A Lighter Shade BeneathAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-33434516433649247062012-07-05T14:59:53.240-07:002012-07-05T14:59:53.240-07:00This brought me vividly back to the road trips we ...This brought me vividly back to the road trips we took when I was a kid -- the chaos, the mess, the edginess on the way back -- so well done. I hope Liese finds an escape.Annabellehttp://glassoffancy.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-22564241693256680122012-07-05T09:10:13.958-07:002012-07-05T09:10:13.958-07:00I liked this. Loved how she gave them random names...I liked this. Loved how she gave them random names; loved the family's conversation she overhears while pretending to be on the phone. Not sure why she wanted to hold this family back a little longer, though. Do they remind her of another family? The family she could've had if Griffin hadn't left? Also love the sun sucking, the mother sucking...that paragraph has great images and even the sound of the words is nice. I do wonder why someday she WAS going to write a book...I wondered why those plans are no more. Instead of someday she plans to or someday she might... does that make sense? I liked the description of her and Griffin's last meeting...This was such an interesting answer to the prompt! It stumped me when I read it. :)Andreahttp://andreamiles.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-65546372698294289632012-07-05T07:24:08.065-07:002012-07-05T07:24:08.065-07:00Phenomenal. Love it. So much life! I wish I had wr...Phenomenal. Love it. So much life! I wish I had written it.8https://www.blogger.com/profile/00897636875216996092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-17421201939425404742012-07-05T07:23:31.595-07:002012-07-05T07:23:31.595-07:00I wish I had written this. So much life here. Wow....I wish I had written this. So much life here. Wow. Phenomenal.8https://www.blogger.com/profile/00897636875216996092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-92178877734127912092012-07-05T05:02:56.948-07:002012-07-05T05:02:56.948-07:00Perhaps the $70,000 per year keeps her in the toll...Perhaps the $70,000 per year keeps her in the toll booth. I found this to be somewhat disjointed and also wonder why an 80 something was hired as a toll-taker...Interesting use of names...Marynoreply@blogger.com