tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post6554020937048666999..comments2023-09-07T05:09:13.736-07:00Comments on Writing in the Margins, Bursting at the Seams: ReflectionAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comBlogger37125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-29371432221416519092013-11-23T13:31:39.437-08:002013-11-23T13:31:39.437-08:00Thank you, Ted. I appreciate your comments!Thank you, Ted. I appreciate your comments!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-22832202246017701652013-11-23T13:30:49.788-08:002013-11-23T13:30:49.788-08:00Thanks, Jayne! Thanks, Jayne! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-88234999804428060302013-11-23T12:48:53.051-08:002013-11-23T12:48:53.051-08:00What the hell was that? No wonder you won. Extra...What the hell was that? No wonder you won. Extraordinary depth to this piece. I loved the image in the first paragraph. I had a friend in this condition after diving in the ocean and finding it too shallow. I fed him a few times. My girlfriend and I would take him to the park to watch kids play softball. Your piece brought that all back to me... I had not thought of him for 30 years. Thank you, Kelly. This is what writing is all about.tedstrutzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09853272125990540823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-30450833475136247692013-11-23T09:38:29.281-08:002013-11-23T09:38:29.281-08:00Congratulations on the Trifecta win! Much deserve...Congratulations on the Trifecta win! Much deserved! :)injaynesworldhttp://injaynesworld.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-36968345491834314092013-11-22T07:54:54.430-08:002013-11-22T07:54:54.430-08:00Thanks so much, Jo-Anne!Thanks so much, Jo-Anne!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-37343661382223637192013-11-21T11:17:39.505-08:002013-11-21T11:17:39.505-08:00Thanks so much, Ivy. I appreciate your reading.
Thanks so much, Ivy. I appreciate your reading.<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-54634096012618639352013-11-21T11:16:50.702-08:002013-11-21T11:16:50.702-08:00Your comments mean a lot, Lance. Thanks for stoppi...Your comments mean a lot, Lance. Thanks for stopping by.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-67576719446307350832013-11-21T11:15:31.898-08:002013-11-21T11:15:31.898-08:00Thanks so much, Kathy!Thanks so much, Kathy!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-71168273722338128432013-11-21T10:57:02.331-08:002013-11-21T10:57:02.331-08:00I'm so envious of how you make every word coun...I'm so envious of how you make every word count. Cara's self awareness is mind-blowing. And those last lines are well crafted.<br /><br />damn you're goodLancehttp://lancemyblogcanbeatupyourblog.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-76723914039921437562013-11-21T09:43:32.421-08:002013-11-21T09:43:32.421-08:00Oh, wow! This is exquisite.
"Sometimes life...Oh, wow! This is exquisite. <br /><br />"Sometimes life just gives you this stuff," her mother says. "And you just have to get through it, one damn day at a time." <----- This line really hit home for me as I'm currently taking care of my ailing mother. <br /><br />Really lovely, touching work!Ivyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933355170869547421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-79987438461811889772013-11-21T09:10:43.085-08:002013-11-21T09:10:43.085-08:00Amazing piece of writing! So poignant!Amazing piece of writing! So poignant!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11564863484894692249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-33871310841180112682013-11-21T06:03:10.398-08:002013-11-21T06:03:10.398-08:00Thanks, Alison! Hope all is well!Thanks, Alison! Hope all is well!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-43290528423053716632013-11-21T05:35:16.859-08:002013-11-21T05:35:16.859-08:00Kelly, this is just lovely.Kelly, this is just lovely.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17681455438068812782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-44535423825612768992013-11-21T03:55:04.858-08:002013-11-21T03:55:04.858-08:00Thanks for stopping by, Lauren!Thanks for stopping by, Lauren!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-63696784247954843752013-11-20T19:49:58.022-08:002013-11-20T19:49:58.022-08:00This is a beautiful, touching piece.This is a beautiful, touching piece.Laurenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02593271448764608855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-36399720168298283642013-11-20T09:53:50.428-08:002013-11-20T09:53:50.428-08:00Thanks so much for reading and responding!Thanks so much for reading and responding!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-7377159190565385512013-11-20T09:49:55.962-08:002013-11-20T09:49:55.962-08:00I agree with others - this is one of the best entr...I agree with others - this is one of the best entries!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-83252533277816070822013-11-20T06:25:18.108-08:002013-11-20T06:25:18.108-08:00Thanks, Trifecta! You made my morning!Thanks, Trifecta! You made my morning!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-53260936157405775042013-11-20T00:51:46.081-08:002013-11-20T00:51:46.081-08:00This story reaches through the screen and touches ...This story reaches through the screen and touches the reader in a way that's beyond touching. It's wonderful. Thanks for linking up!Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16492626287830278024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-86031341772782956102013-11-19T15:45:40.796-08:002013-11-19T15:45:40.796-08:00Thanks, Steph. Looking forward to reading your pie...Thanks, Steph. Looking forward to reading your piece at Trifecta!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-5397191372037156372013-11-19T15:44:27.324-08:002013-11-19T15:44:27.324-08:00Thanks for reading, Flippa!Thanks for reading, Flippa!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-54566529326277838492013-11-19T15:44:15.499-08:002013-11-19T15:44:15.499-08:00I'm wondering about the dad as well - Thanks f...I'm wondering about the dad as well - Thanks for reading MOV!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-2764049816949287162013-11-19T15:43:49.667-08:002013-11-19T15:43:49.667-08:00Thank you, Kymm!Thank you, Kymm!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-62480129111970273882013-11-19T14:40:52.674-08:002013-11-19T14:40:52.674-08:00Oh the details - everywhere from the jello to the ...Oh the details - everywhere from the jello to the reflections. Wow. It may embarrass you, but I'm sitting next to Jayne on this one. Her comment is spot on. :)stephhttp://peopledothingswiththeirlives.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-78065579206401589322013-11-19T07:56:05.888-08:002013-11-19T07:56:05.888-08:00That was haunting and lovely all at the same time!...That was haunting and lovely all at the same time!! I loved this piece!!!Flippa Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04829544779655351950noreply@blogger.com