tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post6925220573770239585..comments2023-09-07T05:09:13.736-07:00Comments on Writing in the Margins, Bursting at the Seams: Things Upside-DownAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-19114208229526759592012-09-13T12:18:00.026-07:002012-09-13T12:18:00.026-07:00I read this a few days ago, but was distracted by ...I read this a few days ago, but was distracted by I can't remember what before commenting. Great take on the prompt! It breaks my heart. There are certainly days when taking care of a baby is so tough and a part of me wishes I could run away. I never would, of course. I wonder what Tessa's side o the story would be...Laurahttp://ratherthecouch.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-57791146275501082702012-09-11T15:26:24.890-07:002012-09-11T15:26:24.890-07:00I really hope he doesn't let her back into his...I really hope he doesn't let her back into his life, and takes up his mother's offer.Tara R.http://thinspiralnotebook.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-32913841772133775732012-09-10T17:39:59.785-07:002012-09-10T17:39:59.785-07:00Thanks, Annabelle - Definitely a long story. I...Thanks, Annabelle - Definitely a long story. I've been working a lot with short stories, preparing to enter a contest in October.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-54227345718242943512012-09-10T17:39:15.494-07:002012-09-10T17:39:15.494-07:00Thanks! Working mainly on short stories now.Thanks! Working mainly on short stories now.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-61477170069700915122012-09-10T17:38:55.449-07:002012-09-10T17:38:55.449-07:00Thanks, Jessie! Wasn't sure if that was the r...Thanks, Jessie! Wasn't sure if that was the right place to cut it off, but I didn't want to draw any conclusions.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-7874040588419436392012-09-10T10:22:36.363-07:002012-09-10T10:22:36.363-07:00That's a great story; long, but it absolutely ...That's a great story; long, but it absolutely kept me engaged. It's a tough road ahead of him, but it seems like he's going to be okay.Annabellehttp://glassoffancy.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-50577132384359691282012-09-10T07:31:31.491-07:002012-09-10T07:31:31.491-07:00Kell Great story! You really get to know these peo...Kell Great story! You really get to know these people, quickly. Like your others, we need a second chapter maybe a third etc.jaumnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-61420883569807183612012-09-09T19:43:49.762-07:002012-09-09T19:43:49.762-07:00My heart just ached for him. I was surprised when ...My heart just ached for him. I was surprised when Tessa had the gall to show up, and I was sad he wouldn't let her see the kids, though I have an idea he was exactly right, that he was, for once, taking the time to do it right. So lovely.Jessie Powellhttp://jesterqueen.com/noreply@blogger.com