tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post709187873455328235..comments2023-09-07T05:09:13.736-07:00Comments on Writing in the Margins, Bursting at the Seams: GuiltyAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-60260531023204915732012-03-12T01:11:24.560-07:002012-03-12T01:11:24.560-07:00ooooh. Nasty. Sharp. Well done. Evelynooooh. Nasty. Sharp. Well done. EvelynEvelynnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-29468115055211739712012-03-11T20:09:17.199-07:002012-03-11T20:09:17.199-07:00Wow. I liked your last line a lot. You've ma...Wow. I liked your last line a lot. You've managed to give us quite a story here in a very short space. Thanks for linking up. Hope to see you again on Monday.Trifectawritingchallengehttp://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-25257933028929626942012-03-11T06:46:08.013-07:002012-03-11T06:46:08.013-07:00Thanks - I'm done with exclamation points. To...Thanks - I'm done with exclamation points. Too dramatic.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-23287251964176278952012-03-11T06:44:21.708-07:002012-03-11T06:44:21.708-07:00Thanks, Jill.Thanks, Jill.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-90266475729057200612012-03-11T06:43:53.473-07:002012-03-11T06:43:53.473-07:00Thanks for reading, Sandra. This wasn't my fa...Thanks for reading, Sandra. This wasn't my favorite thing to write.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-47399898766102517392012-03-11T06:43:27.402-07:002012-03-11T06:43:27.402-07:00Thanks for reading!Thanks for reading!kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-3541866652231945722012-03-11T06:43:12.942-07:002012-03-11T06:43:12.942-07:00Thanks! I really wanted to go for something a bit...Thanks! I really wanted to go for something a bit gentler.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-26483685394423660462012-03-11T06:42:38.712-07:002012-03-11T06:42:38.712-07:00Too depressing.Too depressing.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-50602451011054036242012-03-11T06:42:28.810-07:002012-03-11T06:42:28.810-07:00Thanks for reading, Anna.Thanks for reading, Anna.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-78504798866294053432012-03-11T06:42:10.948-07:002012-03-11T06:42:10.948-07:00Thanks!Thanks!kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-45685792894205403822012-03-11T06:39:40.163-07:002012-03-11T06:39:40.163-07:00A veritable BANG for an ending - well done!A veritable BANG for an ending - well done!Leslicollinsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-38675205792794386552012-03-11T06:06:35.477-07:002012-03-11T06:06:35.477-07:00Oh my! Well done!Oh my! Well done!Johnnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-1205333901581071472012-03-11T05:06:59.678-07:002012-03-11T05:06:59.678-07:00Ooh that's chilling :)Ooh that's chilling :)Anna Smithhttp://universalgibberish.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-9799149912131222552012-03-11T04:36:23.925-07:002012-03-11T04:36:23.925-07:00So good... a 33 word story with a kicker last line...So good... a 33 word story with a kicker last line!jaumnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-87734307428862640462012-03-10T19:01:47.278-08:002012-03-10T19:01:47.278-08:00That's on fire! "If I'm to be condemn...That's on fire! "If I'm to be condemned for murder, then I may as well commit the crime."Jessie Powellhttp://jesterqueen.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-32949657079747137842012-03-10T18:34:39.418-08:002012-03-10T18:34:39.418-08:00Tragic - in more ways than one.Tragic - in more ways than one.Mommyhttp://www.auxilioabalto.us/et.alnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-2010126470526727752012-03-10T18:01:22.272-08:002012-03-10T18:01:22.272-08:00Chilling! And well-deserved exclamation point for...Chilling! And well-deserved exclamation point for it!Sandrahttp://letters-of-muse.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-52299830979086376432012-03-10T17:32:52.981-08:002012-03-10T17:32:52.981-08:00Ooooh, the last line makes it. Well done.Ooooh, the last line makes it. Well done.Jill Khourynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-26714984122598512592012-03-10T17:18:24.700-08:002012-03-10T17:18:24.700-08:00Thanks for reading!Thanks for reading!kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-84399099793764240472012-03-10T17:18:12.063-08:002012-03-10T17:18:12.063-08:00I know! I wanted something gentler, but just could...I know! I wanted something gentler, but just couldn't come up with anything.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-44366421648843005062012-03-10T17:17:45.185-08:002012-03-10T17:17:45.185-08:00Thanks, Barbara.Thanks, Barbara.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-23119557372759569922012-03-10T17:17:23.370-08:002012-03-10T17:17:23.370-08:00Yes, I noticed. Thanks for reading! There, now I...Yes, I noticed. Thanks for reading! There, now I've put one in.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-76959593096294323602012-03-10T17:17:05.818-08:002012-03-10T17:17:05.818-08:00I know! I couldn't come up with a gentle use f...I know! I couldn't come up with a gentle use for an exclamation point!kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-29852852147624178762012-03-10T16:28:02.031-08:002012-03-10T16:28:02.031-08:00Neat one!Neat one!Sightsnbytesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-36695793505872205702012-03-10T13:13:46.602-08:002012-03-10T13:13:46.602-08:00That's a bit scary.That's a bit scary.Booguloonoreply@blogger.com