tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post8748062980270949902..comments2023-09-07T05:09:13.736-07:00Comments on Writing in the Margins, Bursting at the Seams: EngagedAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-24779386648950766822013-01-25T05:30:33.543-08:002013-01-25T05:30:33.543-08:00I really enjoy these characters. They are so real ...I really enjoy these characters. They are so real and relatable.Tara R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02993625193184914299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-16470873372511471152013-01-24T21:33:58.417-08:002013-01-24T21:33:58.417-08:00Great job with the characterization. Feel sorry fo...Great job with the characterization. Feel sorry for Lilly Jean, but maybe Spank will give her the right little box some day.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-15141963786987817712013-01-24T19:46:57.638-08:002013-01-24T19:46:57.638-08:00I love the dialogue, hopefully Spank gets his act ...I love the dialogue, hopefully Spank gets his act together before she gives up on him!Rachaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391186958774991367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-85224739049625576222013-01-24T16:54:17.318-08:002013-01-24T16:54:17.318-08:00very realistic characters - nice workvery realistic characters - nice workAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-4667943963134379992013-01-24T16:11:50.922-08:002013-01-24T16:11:50.922-08:00lmao great piecelmao great pieceDraughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-5890694357698120212013-01-24T10:56:51.328-08:002013-01-24T10:56:51.328-08:00Pull it together Spank!Pull it together Spank!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-90231105776613350562013-01-24T09:13:28.888-08:002013-01-24T09:13:28.888-08:00Well...this is so good on so many levels.....the d...Well...this is so good on so many levels.....the dialogue, interaction, movement, tension, attention to detail...how you got inside both their heads who knows, but you really did, and boy do I recognise Spank.<br />Amazing story.PirateGunnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02619759991219830629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-87214945742964075522013-01-24T09:10:16.154-08:002013-01-24T09:10:16.154-08:00I wish there was a " Like" button on Blo...I wish there was a " Like" button on Blogger.Latitudes of a Dayhttp://latitudesofaday.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-46576540564165539872013-01-24T07:41:22.597-08:002013-01-24T07:41:22.597-08:00Spank needs a good spanking for being "engage...Spank needs a good spanking for being "engaged" otherwise ,when he should have been down on bended knees,holding a lovely ring,proposing to Lilly Jean!I only hope he will get around to it & not keep moping after the long gone Bitsy;-)Great story here:-)Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-90300976624813757242013-01-24T06:16:13.996-08:002013-01-24T06:16:13.996-08:00Great title . .. Gotta love her 'rooting aroun...Great title . .. Gotta love her 'rooting around in her bra' while she lifts those boxes.Deborah Battermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08323806344051047240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-52071550853816061782013-01-23T18:47:02.025-08:002013-01-23T18:47:02.025-08:00oh dear . . . he totally missed all thge hints :)oh dear . . . he totally missed all thge hints :)barbarahttp://purplemoose.kenaiwriter.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-83500319789346178492013-01-23T18:12:15.627-08:002013-01-23T18:12:15.627-08:00I really enjoyed this!I really enjoyed this!Bohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05985370927609164513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-45402528860183561782013-01-23T16:03:10.287-08:002013-01-23T16:03:10.287-08:00Something tells me she'll be waiting quite som...Something tells me she'll be waiting quite some time for that ring! Great dialogue.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-37637219637340596062013-01-23T15:33:48.246-08:002013-01-23T15:33:48.246-08:00Men don't do subtlety very well. He'll fig...Men don't do subtlety very well. He'll figure it out in the end.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-4422877790306980582013-01-23T13:47:21.601-08:002013-01-23T13:47:21.601-08:00It's a bitch getting Spank to realize what he&...It's a bitch getting Spank to realize what he's got in Lily Jean. This is terrific! The dialog and description is vivid and alive!Stephhttp://peopledothingswiththeirlives.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-8821710658728312652013-01-23T12:24:11.263-08:002013-01-23T12:24:11.263-08:00woah. that hurts! I went through a similar experie...woah. that hurts! I went through a similar experience of that kind of disappointment. though we weren't lifting boxes. We were on a romantic dinner cruise. I went home and slammed a pot against the wall:) your dialogue is stunning.Sandra Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13191775335774130719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-1190865693105197312013-01-23T12:18:52.200-08:002013-01-23T12:18:52.200-08:00Bummer! Looks like she has to guide him along a li...Bummer! Looks like she has to guide him along a little less subtly LOL! Great story!Tessahttp://www.finallyawriter.comnoreply@blogger.com