tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post8903455484500664234..comments2023-09-07T05:09:13.736-07:00Comments on Writing in the Margins, Bursting at the Seams: First LinesAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-25899189109226792012012-07-30T10:46:40.419-07:002012-07-30T10:46:40.419-07:00What does the clock see? Besides the passage of ti...What does the clock see? Besides the passage of time... Curious.Cameron (CDG)http://twitter.com/camerongarriepynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-30163476302214161482012-07-29T22:13:28.458-07:002012-07-29T22:13:28.458-07:00Oh, I sense a lot of frustration in these words. T...Oh, I sense a lot of frustration in these words. This story is gonna be tension filled, isn't it?The Gal Herselfhttp://onegalsmusings.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-70461115138047416552012-07-29T20:33:06.058-07:002012-07-29T20:33:06.058-07:00Ah, the uncontrollable passing of time. Well done....Ah, the uncontrollable passing of time. Well done. I want more. <br /><br />So, I'm making the rounds on Trifecta's links and really love wheat I'm reading. <br /><br />Just posted my first piece, as I am brand new. <br /><br />Also following you and will be back! <br /><br />xo<br /><br />Christine<br />@thatgalkikiChristine Macdonaldhttp://twitter.com/thatgalkikinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-33377371695485383782012-07-29T17:36:02.293-07:002012-07-29T17:36:02.293-07:00I like that your entry features a second hand of a...I like that your entry features a second hand of a clock at the opening (instead of a person), so it makes me want to know about the people in it and how they relate to this rushing of time.Sandranoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-47725387248462999252012-07-29T16:36:00.042-07:002012-07-29T16:36:00.042-07:00Thanks, Paula! I'm on the 4th or 5th edit and ...Thanks, Paula! I'm on the 4th or 5th edit and needed to take a break. It'll come out when everyone's back to school.Kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-34684321697046131262012-07-29T14:42:17.660-07:002012-07-29T14:42:17.660-07:00This is as close to poetry as prose can get. Take ...This is as close to poetry as prose can get. Take this one out of the drawer.Paula Jnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-66539307179100023352012-07-29T13:20:55.633-07:002012-07-29T13:20:55.633-07:00Thanks for reading, Old Dog. This was originally ...Thanks for reading, Old Dog. This was originally intended for a YA, but I think some of the content is going to force me to change that.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-42040997590464375142012-07-29T13:18:53.231-07:002012-07-29T13:18:53.231-07:00Lumdog, your comment didn't come through, so I...Lumdog, your comment didn't come through, so I'm posting it here. Thanks so much for reading and commenting! <br /><br />I'm out of breath reading this. I want to find out how the characters are affected by this urgent passage of time.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-62641530961897371922012-07-29T13:15:43.950-07:002012-07-29T13:15:43.950-07:00Thanks for reading Marie!Thanks for reading Marie!kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-1640413848255298062012-07-29T13:15:34.578-07:002012-07-29T13:15:34.578-07:00Thanks, Annabelle - There is a lot going on in thi...Thanks, Annabelle - There is a lot going on in this story.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-63747660383681936022012-07-29T13:15:17.877-07:002012-07-29T13:15:17.877-07:00Thanks, Gina!Thanks, Gina!kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-29214231301447021312012-07-29T13:15:06.940-07:002012-07-29T13:15:06.940-07:00This is the Daddy Sheriff story.This is the Daddy Sheriff story.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-46949552768560118182012-07-29T13:14:41.874-07:002012-07-29T13:14:41.874-07:00Thanks for reading!Thanks for reading!kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-7630214610803122532012-07-29T13:14:29.415-07:002012-07-29T13:14:29.415-07:00Thanks! I'll have to get this out again and g...Thanks! I'll have to get this out again and get back to it.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-87015938761461178652012-07-29T13:14:09.994-07:002012-07-29T13:14:09.994-07:00Thanks, Janna - Small town. Not much happening.Thanks, Janna - Small town. Not much happening.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-81998396777911840972012-07-29T13:13:33.517-07:002012-07-29T13:13:33.517-07:00Thanks for reading! It is a bittersweet story.Thanks for reading! It is a bittersweet story.kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-23677034210442610392012-07-29T13:13:19.300-07:002012-07-29T13:13:19.300-07:00Thanks, Tara. I have to confess I added bitterly ...Thanks, Tara. I have to confess I added bitterly just to get the word count right. Don't tell Trifecta!kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-68063406572361042932012-07-29T13:12:53.864-07:002012-07-29T13:12:53.864-07:00Thanks, Sam!Thanks, Sam!kgwaitenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-60146362931312419522012-07-29T11:56:48.904-07:002012-07-29T11:56:48.904-07:00I agree with Gina - nice twist!I agree with Gina - nice twist!Marie Nicolehttp://www.mycyberhouserules.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-21235765174788778082012-07-29T09:39:46.614-07:002012-07-29T09:39:46.614-07:00The phrase "bitterly discarded moments" ...The phrase "bitterly discarded moments" was the part that caught me; sounds like there's a lot going on here. Well done.Annabellehttp://glassoffancy.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-89370670942269665372012-07-29T08:03:43.559-07:002012-07-29T08:03:43.559-07:00Excellent. Sounds like a book I would have read in...Excellent. Sounds like a book I would have read in school. Yes, it's a weird comment but meant very much to be a compliment. I'm revisiting a lot of these classics with my 12-year-old right now. Great books are great books for a reason. :)OldDogNewTitsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-45059124296878231122012-07-29T06:48:08.980-07:002012-07-29T06:48:08.980-07:00Rushing time and us not rushing it? Very interesti...Rushing time and us not rushing it? Very interesting, for sure!Ginanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-74138538587780096602012-07-29T05:15:25.277-07:002012-07-29T05:15:25.277-07:00One of the great lines "bitterly discarded mo...One of the great lines "bitterly discarded moments". Can't wait to see what story this introduces.jaumnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-54455633274837553862012-07-29T02:03:50.823-07:002012-07-29T02:03:50.823-07:00That second hand knows something! Descriptive. W...That second hand knows something! Descriptive. Would want to read more..xRosie Smith-Nazillihttp://twitter.com/MrsNazillinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-14528618327281797752012-07-29T00:59:40.137-07:002012-07-29T00:59:40.137-07:00I like the idea of time hurling itself forward to ...I like the idea of time hurling itself forward to see how it all comes out in the end. Thanks for playing along with us this week. Please come on back Monday for the new prompt.Trifectahttp://twitter.com/trifectawritingnoreply@blogger.com