tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post9162347458086090874..comments2023-09-07T05:09:13.736-07:00Comments on Writing in the Margins, Bursting at the Seams: FanaticAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-77765091325243210872011-10-27T17:02:28.083-07:002011-10-27T17:02:28.083-07:00Great characters, Kelly. They seem so real.Great characters, Kelly. They seem so real.Coming Eastnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-42753145237890665472011-10-27T17:00:29.599-07:002011-10-27T17:00:29.599-07:00There's so much in this story. Your descriptio...There's so much in this story. Your descriptions are beautiful--I read them twice. And then the interaction between Lilly Jean and Howard was amazing. Howard said so much without saying one word and Lilly Jean's passionate dislike of Daddy Sheriff just built. Lovely, left me wanting to read more.snhamletthttp://twitter.com/snhamlettnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-68987942649303203852011-10-26T19:40:32.799-07:002011-10-26T19:40:32.799-07:00You were able to convey a lot from Howard without ...You were able to convey a lot from Howard without him saying anything. Very well done.Tara R.http://thinspiralnotebook.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-48826348001197782862011-10-26T08:16:48.472-07:002011-10-26T08:16:48.472-07:00The descriptions of the weather and outdoors are r...The descriptions of the weather and outdoors are really vivid. The whole piece read very well with Lilly Jean's list of complaints against Daddy carrying the story on. Interesting characters.Liz Thompsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-65506490168156581572011-10-25T19:03:53.100-07:002011-10-25T19:03:53.100-07:00I'm glad you wrote about them again. I don'...I'm glad you wrote about them again. I don't think it's going to end well for Daddy Sheriff.Head Anthttp://headant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-55054670013308673002011-10-25T14:22:30.406-07:002011-10-25T14:22:30.406-07:00I love the way you write Kelly! Your descriptions ...I love the way you write Kelly! Your descriptions of the weather and nature bring a beautiful touch of reality to the sordid details of those who have chosen to revolve around 'Daddy Sheriff.' Lilly Jean is a sister who needs liberating, but I am awed at the amount of facts, nuances and details packed into this piece.Elizabeth Youngnoreply@blogger.com