tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post9165943263168547972..comments2023-09-07T05:09:13.736-07:00Comments on Writing in the Margins, Bursting at the Seams: Poisonous WordsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-14318716329383424612011-12-08T01:03:04.795-08:002011-12-08T01:03:04.795-08:00This is a wonderful piece. I think I know this wom...This is a wonderful piece. I think I know this woman. Perhaps we all do. She is very, very dangerous.<br /><br />Looking forward to reading more. Be well.Keve Bradleyhttp://www.facebook.com/people/Keve-Bradley/100002675862618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-6143605771385226802011-12-05T04:21:38.476-08:002011-12-05T04:21:38.476-08:00Thank you so much for joining Trifecta: Week Three...Thank you so much for joining Trifecta: Week Three. I really enjoyed reading your response. The weeping milk, gathering words like fish on the end of a line--your metaphors are fun twists of phrase. Children turning against mothers is always a thought-provoking idea. I certainly hope you'll return for week four.Trifectanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-49409083859611348552011-12-01T15:08:10.272-08:002011-12-01T15:08:10.272-08:00strong, very strong
Fav part: "Does she wish...strong, very strong<br /><br />Fav part: "Does she wish she could gather up those words, as the farmer’s wife gathers her eggs on a bright winter’s morning yet unspoiled by greetings and banalities? "<br /><br />The juxaposition of that imagery with what those words do is powerful.<br /><br />liked itTLanceBnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-68696094265366133842011-12-01T08:58:17.600-08:002011-12-01T08:58:17.600-08:00Wow, you certainly rise to these challenges! Your ...Wow, you certainly rise to these challenges! Your writing is exquisite and always frames so beautifully the topic. I write by inspiration and cannot image being able do what you do, it is a real gift. Well done for another winning piece!Elizabeth Youngnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-12252064316441577232011-11-30T14:36:56.557-08:002011-11-30T14:36:56.557-08:00Thanks for reading!Thanks for reading!Kgwaitehttp://writinginthemarginsburstingattheseams.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8009654420271577413.post-38310418550738859452011-11-30T12:43:30.792-08:002011-11-30T12:43:30.792-08:00Excellent!Excellent!Cindy Brownhttp://www.everydayunderwear.comnoreply@blogger.com