First Love, Failed

She said she liked him; He liked her, too!

She said she loved him.

That was the end

This was written in response to The Trifecta Writing Challenge.  The weekend challenge was to write a story in three sentences.

This did happen to me.  But it was in Kindergarten.

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Writing in the Margins, Bursting at the Seams: First Love, Failed

Friday, February 3, 2012

First Love, Failed

She said she liked him; He liked her, too!

She said she loved him.

That was the end

This was written in response to The Trifecta Writing Challenge.  The weekend challenge was to write a story in three sentences.

This did happen to me.  But it was in Kindergarten.

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21 Comments:

At February 3, 2012 at 1:40 PM , Anonymous barbara said...

Run!!!! Run while you can!

very telling. :)

 
At February 3, 2012 at 4:05 PM , Anonymous Booguloo said...

Barbara said it all.

 
At February 3, 2012 at 5:16 PM , Anonymous Dana said...

What? No kiss?

 
At February 3, 2012 at 5:38 PM , Anonymous Natalie said...

Can happen not just in kindergarten. Good entry.

 
At February 3, 2012 at 6:20 PM , Anonymous Kgwaite said...

Thanks, Natalie!

 
At February 3, 2012 at 6:20 PM , Anonymous Kgwaite said...

Um...no. He wasn't interested.

 
At February 3, 2012 at 6:20 PM , Anonymous Kgwaite said...

Thanks!

 
At February 3, 2012 at 6:21 PM , Anonymous Kgwaite said...

Actually, he was the one running away. I guess he wasn't ready for that kind of commitment.

 
At February 3, 2012 at 7:16 PM , Anonymous Pamelitasayers said...

Love being the operative word here. Good write.

Pamela

 
At February 3, 2012 at 8:55 PM , Anonymous jesterqueen1 said...

I can't decide whether I think she moved too fast or whether I think he was commitment shy. Or possibly both.

 
At February 3, 2012 at 9:08 PM , Anonymous N Likes said...

Ooh, I like this one. Thanks!

 
At February 4, 2012 at 9:03 AM , Anonymous dbs said...

I wish this would have happened to my daughter.

 
At February 4, 2012 at 9:04 AM , Anonymous SAM said...

Awww!!! Such a cute story!

 
At February 4, 2012 at 1:15 PM , Anonymous The Mommy Patient said...

I love the irony of this.

 
At February 4, 2012 at 1:48 PM , Anonymous Carrie said...

Awwww, young love :(. I keep thinking my 5yo will come home announcing she has a boyfriend lol. She talks about this one boy am awful lot

 
At February 4, 2012 at 8:13 PM , Anonymous LDiggitty said...

Awww, so sweet! It brings back memories of puppy love...

 
At February 5, 2012 at 12:43 AM , Anonymous Trifectawritingchallenge said...

Thanks for joining up with this week's Trifextra Challenge. Your response got a smile out of me. It is, indeed, a complete story, isn't it? I like the way it ends with, literally, "the end." Sort of a commentary on the story itself. Nicely done. Hope to see you back on Monday for the weekday prompt.

 
At February 5, 2012 at 6:08 AM , Anonymous Kim said...

Welcome to my dating life post-college. ;)
Came from the Trifecta link.

 
At February 5, 2012 at 6:58 AM , Anonymous Gina said...

Commitment phobe? This was great and does actually happen. Visiting from Trfecta.

 
At February 5, 2012 at 8:56 AM , Anonymous Satu Gustafson said...

This could have been written by my friend. :)

 
At February 5, 2012 at 2:14 PM , Anonymous Frelle said...

relatable and so simple. great job.. love the detail about kindergarten :)

 

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