Compatibility Test


Member them squishy toilet seats?
The vinyl ones? Foam-stuffed?
I loved them. Troubles kinda' sank away.
Imagine cleaning.
While yer lawyerin', I'll clean.
No. Horrible things.
Gimmie my ring back. We ain't compatible.

This was written for this week's Trifecta Writing Challenge. We were to write thirty-three words of dialogue.

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Writing in the Margins, Bursting at the Seams: Compatibility Test

Sunday, February 3, 2013

Compatibility Test


Member them squishy toilet seats?
The vinyl ones? Foam-stuffed?
I loved them. Troubles kinda' sank away.
Imagine cleaning.
While yer lawyerin', I'll clean.
No. Horrible things.
Gimmie my ring back. We ain't compatible.

This was written for this week's Trifecta Writing Challenge. We were to write thirty-three words of dialogue.

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6 Comments:

At February 3, 2013 at 5:26 PM , Blogger Draug said...

Soft seat warm seat little ring of foam...

 
At February 3, 2013 at 6:18 PM , Blogger Trifecta said...

OMG. Deal breaker. Too funny.

 
At February 3, 2013 at 7:03 PM , OpenID jannatwrites said...

Well, if the foam seat didn't tear them apart, the "right" way to put the TP on the roll surely would have!

 
At February 3, 2013 at 8:14 PM , Blogger PurpleMoose said...

gimme my ring back! :)

 
At February 4, 2013 at 5:08 AM , Blogger Bee said...

Oh, ick! I remember those seats!

 
At February 4, 2013 at 11:44 AM , Blogger Elisabeth Kinsey said...

In the middle of a cold night, they were Godsent.

 

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